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rotherhamfox

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This is the start of a song ive wrote anyone wanna help me? Just stick sum lines you fink fit.

Look at yourself in the mirror,

Slowly picking me apart,

Feeling inadequate and wanting to be loved,

Expectations raised to lofty heights,

Pressure and peers edging you closer to a limit you wanna avoid
 

MKFox

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rotherhamfox said:
Look at yourself in the mirror,
Slowly picking me apart,
you're exuding detestation,
It was just a little fart.


Feeling inadequate and wanting to be loved,
Expectations raised to lofty heights,
I've had a few cans of stella,
they're only little love bites.


Pressure and peers edging you closer,
to a limit you wanna avoid
I don't think I like you,
You look like ormondroyd.
I'm here all week
 

rotherhamfox

New Member
MKFox said:
rotherhamfox said:
Look at yourself in the mirror,
Slowly picking me apart,
you're exuding detestation,
It was just a little fart.


Feeling inadequate and wanting to be loved,
Expectations raised to lofty heights,
I've had a few cans of stella,
they're only little love bites.


Pressure and peers edging you closer,
to a limit you wanna avoid
I don't think I like you,
You look like ormondroyd.
I'm here all week

Any others, MK well tried :wink:
 

MKFox

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i was giving a married man's perspective...
 

rotherhamfox

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MKFox said:
i was giving a married man's perspective...

Yeh i know i was messing, it was good.
 

Ricey

New Member
I'm nearing my revolution
Feeling angst towards the world
A life shaped with anxiety
Just not enough for you

Hatred is not a opinion
It's a fact of my tired brain
Smoking my mind away
Dead end street is where I am

Probably sh*t but I just wrote it off the top off my head.
 

Babylon

Active Member
Thought i woulds come up with a completely new one!!!!

my heart is filled with expectation
each time i'm close it falls apart
i'm left alone with my reflection
that girl i loved she broke my heart

Chorus:
wipe away those tears i hear
they say it's good that she departed
they just dont understand my fear
of living life so lonely hearted.

will my love for her go on forever
twelve months on it's not mended
no chance of gettng back together
i just hope this hurt wasn't intended

Chorus:
wipe away those tears i hear
they say it's good that she departed
they still dont understand my fear
of living life so lonely hearted.

the time has come to move on i know
after all this time im sure it's right
it's hard after such a heavy blow
but after dark theres always light

Not bad for 10 minutes!! first time i've tried this.









Ps. Don't think about nicking this as i have intellectual copyright. :wink:
 

Babylon

Active Member
rotherhamfox said:
Look at yourself in the mirror,
Slowly picking me apart,
In my mind its looking clearer,
But really i don't know where to start

Pressure and peers edging you closer,
to a limit you wanna avoid,
wondering when you'll ever find her,
to fill this empty void.
 

rotherhamfox

New Member
Babylon said:
rotherhamfox said:
Look at yourself in the mirror,
Slowly picking me apart,
In my mind its looking clearer,
But really i don't know where to start

Pressure and peers edging you closer,
to a limit you wanna avoid,
wondering when you'll ever find her,
to fill this empty void.

Liking it Babs, good stuff.
 

Malf

New Member
Strap on what you know best
Never enter murky waters
She will come back one day
Just hang in there come what may
 
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