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Ricey

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Might aswell start a thread where I can post some of my lyrics, no one probably gives a sh*t but tough! ;)

--Opposites Attract---

I'm a self-isolated man, begging for freedom
You are a party animal, unleashed and unsure
I'm a eternal dreamer, dreaming of you close
You are a shining angel, sent down just for fun

We ain't the same, we ain't so lame
It's true what they say, opposites attract!
We are not near, We do not fear
It's true what they say, opposites attract!

I'm a shy victim of tortue, healing all alone
You are a beautiful misfit, recovered and rebuilt
I'm a lonely believer, needing pills and you
You're a pure fantasy, living my real life

We ain't the same, we ain't so lame
It's true what they say, opposites attract!
We are not near, We do not fear
It's true what they say, opposites attract!

The truth is out there and so are you!
I so want you but I know I can't!
You are part of me already
Seeing is only beleiving you.........I already do!

Attracted and distracted

--Empathy--

You were taken away from us
By someone who got jealous
10 years of absence
Still no one sees innosence

Inspring the masses from the grave
No one will ever see what you gave
Its all so sad, you need sympathy
Peace, love and emapathy

She will pay
One day

Lifes never moved since you left
Stolen from the world in a theft
We will never know you
But I feel like I do

Living in the echo like I have done
I feel so alike, I feel like a son
It will never rest, never a apology
Peace, love and emapathy
Peace, love and emapathy

You burnt out but I wish you faded away

--False Sense of Attraction--

Special entry to my heart
I let you in reluctantly
Fallen for you in a flash
Can't believe this came for free

I love you and I know its wrong
You were beside me now your gone
You've left me in a state of shock
Leave my life and lock the lock

Why do this to me?! (x3)

You led me to your open trap
I felt so safe, I felt alive
Your irresistable to me
No matter what you speak or say

I loved you but you hate me
I can't beleive society
You've trashed my heart and made it bleed
Selfish nature full of greed

Why do this to me?! (x2)
Look what you've done to me!

Hate the memories of you
Your the one bitch I need
I fell into your hole alone
You've ruined it!

Why do this to me?! (x3)
Look what you've done to me!

You were a angel of pure hope
Invaded my own sanity
Obsession is not a real fault
Its just a fact with you and me!

Why do this to me?! (x3)
Look what you've done to me!

Why do this to me?! (x3)
Look what you've done to me!

--Forbidden Desire--

Recuperating in a dwell
You came to my life
Took me by my swollen hand
And brought me back to life

She hardly knows my innerself
But I hardly know her
A request straight from my heaven
For once its seems so real

We were made for each other
All I want is to be your lover
Keep me going and keep me flowing
Is this just a dream reaccuring?

I Can't beleive our likeness
Carved from the same stone
I tried hard to take it easy
But instead I've fallen through

I just want you to know that I
Can't wait till we're there
There is nothing you could say
That will make me less aware

We were made for each other
All I want is to be your lover
Keep me going and keep me flowing
Is this just a dream reaccuring?

Be a hope!
Be a dream!
Be a light!
Be a star!
Be a trend!
Be a rose!
Be a friend!
Be.....be MINE!!

--Out of the ordinary--

Outcasted socially
Isolated emotionally
Permanently lonely
All I want is to love me

Absorb the angst that I feel for you
Teenage feelings are left to rue
High hopes for a respected friend
Teenage feelings I have to send

Integrated socially
Exaggerated emotionally
Reluctantly lonely
All I want is to be free

Absorb the angst that I feel for you
Teenage feelings are left to rue
High hopes for a respected friend
Teenage feelings I have to send

Love me!...for who I am
Hate me!...for who I am
Kiss me!...for who I am
Kill me!...for what I'm not
 

Ricey

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--Fully Formed Obsession--

The path to you is crowded
Crowded with uncertainty
The dream of you is familar
I've dreamt it for eternity

I just want you to be by my side
Got to be patient, Got to smile
I'm just glad that you exist
Got to love you, Its not hard

Your name is on the tip of my tongue
But I'm speachless with need
I'm not a perfect species
But I'm also not full of greed

I just want you to be by my side
Got to be patient, Got to smile
I'm just glad that you exist
Got to love you, Its not hard

I begining to get desperate
I'll wait but not with ease
Fully formed obsession
Paid for without no fees

I just want to be by your side
Have to be patient, Have to smile
I'm just glad that you are here
I love you, It was not hard
 

Malf

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Brilliant stuff, I get the feeling your sexually frustrated though. :wink: All your songs are about your desire to be with someone. Your lyrics say this very subtly, why don't you just throw a line in such as:

'I keep getting the full mast, just get him out you don't need to ask'
 

Ricey

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Malf said:
Brilliant stuff, I get the feeling your sexually frustrated though. :wink: All your songs are about your desire to be with someone. Your lyrics say this very subtly, why don't you just throw a line in such as:

'I keep getting the full mast, just get him out you don't need to ask'
:lol:

You could be right Malfy but that's not the intention, yes most of my songs are about a desire for someone but its more wanting them as a person.........not a sex object ;)

Pure filth!
 

Malf

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Ricey said:
Malf said:
Brilliant stuff, I get the feeling your sexually frustrated though. :wink: All your songs are about your desire to be with someone. Your lyrics say this very subtly, why don't you just throw a line in such as:

'I keep getting the full mast, just get him out you don't need to ask'
:lol:

You could be right Malfy but that's not the intention, yes most of my songs are about a desire for someone but its more wanting them as a person.........not a sex object ;)

Pure filth!
Well if you change your style of music, you have my consent to use my above lyrics.
 

Ricey

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Malf said:
Ricey said:
Malf said:
Brilliant stuff, I get the feeling your sexually frustrated though. :wink: All your songs are about your desire to be with someone. Your lyrics say this very subtly, why don't you just throw a line in such as:

'I keep getting the full mast, just get him out you don't need to ask'
:lol:

You could be right Malfy but that's not the intention, yes most of my songs are about a desire for someone but its more wanting them as a person.........not a sex object ;)

Pure filth!
Well if you change your style of music, you have my consent to use my above lyrics.
Tip top! :D
 

Malf

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Ricey said:
Malf said:
Ricey said:
Malf said:
Brilliant stuff, I get the feeling your sexually frustrated though. :wink: All your songs are about your desire to be with someone. Your lyrics say this very subtly, why don't you just throw a line in such as:

'I keep getting the full mast, just get him out you don't need to ask'
:lol:

You could be right Malfy but that's not the intention, yes most of my songs are about a desire for someone but its more wanting them as a person.........not a sex object ;)

Pure filth!
Well if you change your style of music, you have my consent to use my above lyrics.
Tip top! :D
Check out my song Ricey.
 

Ricey

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Malf said:
Ricey said:
Malf said:
Ricey said:
Malf said:
Brilliant stuff, I get the feeling your sexually frustrated though. :wink: All your songs are about your desire to be with someone. Your lyrics say this very subtly, why don't you just throw a line in such as:

'I keep getting the full mast, just get him out you don't need to ask'
:lol:

You could be right Malfy but that's not the intention, yes most of my songs are about a desire for someone but its more wanting them as a person.........not a sex object ;)

Pure filth!
Well if you change your style of music, you have my consent to use my above lyrics.
Tip top! :D
Check out my song Ricey.
I have and its very........interesting ;)
 

Ricey

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--Needle in a Hay Stack--

Needle in a hay stack
Needle in a hay stack
Why have you taken so long to find?
I've been searching all my life
Your here now, Your there then

Turn me around, steer me back on course
Hold me tightly, give me want I have craved
Aid me again, right down to my source
Love me truely, give you all I have saved

Needle in my hay stack
Needle in my hay stack
I hope i do not lose you again
You are too good to let go
Your not here yet, Your not mine yet

Turn you around, steer you back on course
Hold you tightly, give you want you have craved
Aid you again, right down to your source
Love you truely, give me all you have saved

Needle in a hay stack
Needle in a hay stack
Overwhelmed by your discovery
 

Joe_Fox

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Ricey said:
--Needle in a Hay Stack--

Needle in a hay stack
Needle in a hay stack
Why have you taken so long to find?
I've been searching all my life
Your here now, Your there then

Turn me around, steer me back on course
Hold me tightly, give me want I have craved
Aid me again, right down to my source
Love me truely, give you all I have saved

Needle in my hay stack
Needle in my hay stack
I hope i do not lose you again
You are too good to let go
Your not here yet, Your not mine yet

Turn you around, steer you back on course
Hold you tightly, give you want you have craved
Aid you again, right down to your source
Love you truely, give me all you have saved

Needle in a hay stack
Needle in a hay stack
Overwhelmed by your discovery
Worst effort yet Ricey, sorry but I think that is pretty crap.
 

Ricey

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Joe_Fox said:
Ricey said:
--Needle in a Hay Stack--

Needle in a hay stack
Needle in a hay stack
Why have you taken so long to find?
I've been searching all my life
Your here now, Your there then

Turn me around, steer me back on course
Hold me tightly, give me want I have craved
Aid me again, right down to my source
Love me truely, give you all I have saved

Needle in my hay stack
Needle in my hay stack
I hope i do not lose you again
You are too good to let go
Your not here yet, Your not mine yet

Turn you around, steer you back on course
Hold you tightly, give you want you have craved
Aid you again, right down to your source
Love you truely, give me all you have saved

Needle in a hay stack
Needle in a hay stack
Overwhelmed by your discovery
Worst effort yet Ricey, sorry but I think that is pretty crap.
I don't think it's crap at all but it's your opinion, it means alot to me because it's my feelings on a few things and at the end of the day that's why I do it.
 

Joe_Fox

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Ricey said:
I don't think it's crap at all but it's your opinion, it means alot to me because it's my feelings on a few things and at the end of the day that's why I do it.
I'm not having a go at you mate, just voicing my opinion. I've read it again and am still of the opinion that it isn't very good but if you enjoy writing then keep doing it!
 

Ricey

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Joe_Fox said:
Ricey said:
I don't think it's crap at all but it's your opinion, it means alot to me because it's my feelings on a few things and at the end of the day that's why I do it.
I'm not having a go at you mate, just voicing my opinion. I've read it again and am still of the opinion that it isn't very good but if you enjoy writing then keep doing it!
Out of interest why don't you like it? I tried to structure it more 'uniqually' but I'm not sure if it works yet.
 

Joe_Fox

Well-Known Member
Ricey said:
Joe_Fox said:
Ricey said:
I don't think it's crap at all but it's your opinion, it means alot to me because it's my feelings on a few things and at the end of the day that's why I do it.
I'm not having a go at you mate, just voicing my opinion. I've read it again and am still of the opinion that it isn't very good but if you enjoy writing then keep doing it!
Out of interest why don't you like it? I tried to structure it more 'uniqually' but I'm not sure if it works yet.
I just think it's very contrived. The lyrics are obvious and repetative.
 

Ricey

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Joe_Fox said:
Ricey said:
Joe_Fox said:
Ricey said:
I don't think it's crap at all but it's your opinion, it means alot to me because it's my feelings on a few things and at the end of the day that's why I do it.
I'm not having a go at you mate, just voicing my opinion. I've read it again and am still of the opinion that it isn't very good but if you enjoy writing then keep doing it!
Out of interest why don't you like it? I tried to structure it more 'uniqually' but I'm not sure if it works yet.
I just think it's very contrived. The lyrics are obvious and repetative.
Repetative maybe, but obvious not all! Obviously what?
 

Joe_Fox

Well-Known Member
Ricey said:
Repetative maybe, but obvious not all! Obviously what?
"Needle in a hay stack
Needle in a hay stack
Why have you taken so long to find?"


That is very very obvious in my opinion.
 

Ricey

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Joe_Fox said:
Ricey said:
Repetative maybe, but obvious not all! Obviously what?
"Needle in a hay stack
Needle in a hay stack
Why have you taken so long to find?"


That is very very obvious in my opinion.
Obviously what though? It can't just be obvious, that's how I see a certain situation and it's not obvious at all. I haven't really found a needle in a hay stack!
 

Joe_Fox

Well-Known Member
Ricey said:
Joe_Fox said:
Ricey said:
Repetative maybe, but obvious not all! Obviously what?
"Needle in a hay stack
Needle in a hay stack
Why have you taken so long to find?"


That is very very obvious in my opinion.
Obviously what though? It can't just be obvious, that's how I see a certain situation and it's not obvious at all. I haven't really found a needle in a hay stack!
Ricey, I mean that when I read "Needle in a hay stack", I just knew that the next words would be something like "why have I been looking for you so long" or something and I was right - that's what I mean by obvious - obvious lyric progression. That's why I think it is crap.
 

Ricey

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Joe_Fox said:
Ricey said:
Joe_Fox said:
Ricey said:
Repetative maybe, but obvious not all! Obviously what?
"Needle in a hay stack
Needle in a hay stack
Why have you taken so long to find?"


That is very very obvious in my opinion.
Obviously what though? It can't just be obvious, that's how I see a certain situation and it's not obvious at all. I haven't really found a needle in a hay stack!
Ricey, I mean that when I read "Needle in a hay stack", I just knew that the next words would be something like "why have I been looking for you so long" or something and I was right - that's what I mean by obvious - obvious lyric progression. That's why I think it is crap.
Okay fair point but that was one of many lines I thought of for after "Needle in a hay stack" but that one fitted the emotion I was trying to get across the most.

I see your point though.
 
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